So this is my first draft of my English Coursework; a transformation of a novel and a play script and using Sylvia Plath as a style model. I won’t give you a background; so if you need more of an explanation (as this is only a tiny piece as its eventually going to be about 2500 words!) just message me on Twitter @ChloePynen 🙂
“Benevolence of her bust; like she my brood not,
Caress the intrinsic zeal she emits- light
allowing in the unallowed; do not lull.
A soul like mine, like death abaft all life.
Under my sins rests that something not unknown. Her,
I endure mindlessness lorn like the moon does
without suns; my blood pulsating through her being. Blissful.
Our affinity is the only titillations,
Blackwhite with two zests the same beat; livid,
Encircles no glut of the earth- hear nothing,
A fury pretends to help like light; scream
they do not know how muted they appear now.
They think it hinders creation further nor
deeper into directions of the hands of our makers.”
ChloePynen 